Is there a Monster?

This is just a basic sketch that really captures how I do things now — buggy eyes, dumpy body, wild hair. What would I like to improve about this? I don’t think the text is so hot. It’s legible, but it doesn’t look nice. I’m also not thrilled about the panic marks on the left side of his head. They’re a little too bulky too really be effective. Also, I think the picture would’ve been more dynamic if I had turned that single line into a corner. It would’ve added a bit of pop that it’s missing.

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